TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架

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6 y5 `7 k2 D  ~2 ~, K" g(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)

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& H5 i) K% |. [5 X* O- f$ J(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
3 C5 a( j' y- l3 P3 o0 v6 zWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
1 n& u$ O8 X' |* e3 nA is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...


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, _6 J+ R  [5 j* h2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
7 K% f4 a. N8 V2 [, E1 Emoreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)

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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
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9 S* ~4 c% _' ]+ H, I- |6 K5 A+ q6 MThere is no denying that…
, s7 {4 K, h6 {3 aAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
" y' b# r! i. J* W* A- VFinally,…
# L9 P; z% N; _7 S! S/ fBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…

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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
: z' U5 _2 w2 Z! k" L1 FA is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
% S- F% g' }, H1 K" ~+ {# w& V4 M; OFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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& {  H1 T1 f' r5 h0 ~( A(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型

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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
" R/ v' f) \% B1 ?# S( c* n, eWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
) C6 r2 ?1 M" _+ {, x  W: cThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
4 g4 \, m# z/ L$ {* A# T+ CFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
5 P% p6 g5 D8 a! e8 a3 JFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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4 K; E' G/ `  R. w( B6 W6 i+ Y陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
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To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX



2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.


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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.

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3 D+ S$ q, t, h' ~, ?, T! l2 DOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
  Y+ C. l" B/ t7 L9 p8 Q3 C. o/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
7 P6 A+ D0 q% I# {+ {# k) M; _: ~0 i/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore
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  o% F" X8 {: Z$ _( IIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

9 L0 U& \0 r/ K3 S: ~$ g! u再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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4 Z, g; P, W7 h[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]