TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架


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(一) 对立观点式
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
1 n& A& Y' m6 S3 y9 M* Q1 d3 CThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
  R" ~$ I. M$ j; b) b# l4 gWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
+ c5 l& T" L' E$ K0 wFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...


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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)


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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
# Z6 f3 U$ X& C$ p; qon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
/ Q  K* _9 D$ O; M, \4 jmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)

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After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
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5 O4 X# n0 k& l0 U4 t" \Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
% N1 R8 l$ ^9 p3 H- J, D9 dFinally,…
: D2 }( f4 ^+ m' ?. A; iBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…



  M0 @# G6 u3 W  f２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)
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; F4 G  a( Z, E, z2 [) I$ `(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
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A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
$ a& V* j3 N3 M9 q) \* U7 KFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
- ^% k4 _2 _- I3 `* U" vWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
+ g: y' f5 ?3 s, O1 S+ RFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.



陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
9 ]1 i) j! [. dOne of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
  v8 w+ F! ~' {0 g6 W2 J; a! N… is responsible for xxx, as well.
" @9 n) A- o/ R$ z: l. jTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX


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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
& e  m. P- }1 p' j* T/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…


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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

朱顺顺

嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

) L* G$ F/ j# `再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

5 K0 l9 u) N9 |& c) ^[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]