TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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+ K) g# T4 S) s, ~3 v(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
' ?/ c+ I8 I$ o7 |. u* t" l! yA is superior in another way, this is…
3 H" ?; X, Z% B4 j7 T0 tIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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0 E3 O/ ^7 Y" B& D, g) {' OTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
- R$ c3 e) M  T  S* d: E! FWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
  @9 w5 F+ }% h3 aFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
# Y2 k+ L9 X# A9 X1 }% \% M- rmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)

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% h+ r4 W3 [) ~1 k+ b/ u  ^! h4 F* J首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
' _2 k: w7 K! E# [" b6 BFinally,…
+ t2 Q3 A# @: N  F( Y% [' EBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…

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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)



3 _$ [' m6 J/ l* h8 z0 D; J" c(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
+ a8 {. n. ~8 M& w7 f6 s" j+ cIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
* V4 d$ [/ K, r; oWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
* G# U' u1 ^5 Q' C$ aThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
# c: I, }) j) Y: XWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
/ Y  O0 n4 f) k2 e# K: a; \C is superior in another way, this is…
0 `- @  t4 x5 F. w& KFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
* ]4 d6 `" P; Y: y8 s% }$ HFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
! }2 [- |" X) y9 B" }(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)

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1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.


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陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
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To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX

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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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0 i5 t9 c) e3 G% e% g* I  _$ ?" ?7 v( q6 XThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.

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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…



In addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

; M& v. s9 l+ A4 l[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]