TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架

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2 L' Z* |2 A' `- T- S6 K(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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1 t4 e3 F0 T5 }: a  T* m(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
8 P5 j7 R  Q) @! T- ZThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
' A: X) u3 d$ LWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
, M9 }) u" c* J0 i/ _, f' C5 \From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...


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- h( |) n" a9 Y% n% U" |. C2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)



, S# Y% h% [5 HTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
( D$ G# b) ?, {% m0 ]Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
. D0 j! |; U' Z& C+ x) @( k& pon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
: `) e* U" B) T; Kmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
, f' I4 i- m5 m: Z( ~From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.


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  F; l6 S" p3 _: x$ O(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
; I$ p! B9 P) {7 ?  ?2 kThere is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
' e% ~' |/ O2 o5 n' a2 S% g: ^Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…

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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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. Q5 O, O; P3 }5 O  o1 v(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
- _8 f( g) o5 d0 R2 ZThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
1 d! y: v- S9 ]; o/ Y6 b  zWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
5 U- ^- Y( L' Q+ q( w! @! f, l, zA is superior in another way, this is…
6 r6 s. v, {8 F: lIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
% g- f7 p/ Q: _$ RFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...



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, J& ~+ u- U6 g" j(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型

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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
! I, u# c% |- @! GThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
, P2 B! i7 Z$ c9 S7 {What is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
0 }+ k) E8 x# e: J0 r2 j5 pFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
9 Q5 d, [, p1 m2 L) X7 N0 C(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)


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(四)原因解释型
  K; v7 p# j% d) _+ S1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.



/ H; B5 Z' p' _9 R陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
, [( X' Y  @5 T5 N5 ~) vOne of the primary causes is that…
) Z* Z# ~* G9 H! @  N" i+ WXXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.


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4 \2 k, O9 E3 q; h8 Z4 K( }0 {& BThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.

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% l& ^" ]4 A7 w5 Y7 e8 V) T) pOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
1 D- t3 [) q; ?2 q' y/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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. _$ C0 {& b8 U2 f5 {; `% W- e! Fa more subtle point which we must consider is that…

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7 b0 r- C$ l' u/ E# \. GIn addition/ furthermore

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3 G# X/ A& C& F: y  \In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

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