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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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% V  M4 q4 c4 E+ `6 E(一) 对立观点式
6 f. {* P# g3 V/ B& v0 O1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)   R% O2 J- @+ o: U# ~
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7 b/ m5 z% a7 B+ K& T(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons. - z+ C  z$ B% n6 C  h
The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… 5 \, ~8 a' H: P1 ?& p3 Z$ w7 e
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… : G5 L( b9 }8 U: T' Z
A is superior in another way, this is… 6 d7 {/ V, u/ s, H% Q- ?( W
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… * u! k) d* p& p; c
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... ( J+ g& P: a: H" y6 _0 ^
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast) 3 c( C+ i9 {1 G9 N3 ~- }

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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B. ! g6 e/ X/ n$ T8 A9 v  R
For A, A 的一个优势 ( |/ f8 r9 p& {; b
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
& q: r4 T1 r& q* Q+ ?' e8 h+ sFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is... 9 o* D4 _6 a# [+ k, _" i0 [, o- b
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is… 8 g) |% r# D% p6 d1 D$ n1 R. T
moreover, B的优点2,for example… $ Z. s6 i8 ]6 ?6 }" x
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2. 4 O! q# G5 V- s  o8 F

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1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
' G9 B3 A8 ^0 A; t1 R9 ^% ], JAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
: Q) K/ i4 E' N- s% ^% o/ b  \There is no denying that… . s5 x! I% X# I& N* W, l( z
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that… + c, H; p2 l: @# p
Finally,…
' g0 k, X1 r# i2 ~% Y6 k9 VBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that… ( @, w4 e. B/ C

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% w7 X) Y5 K3 Z; M" k+ p1 n9 ^5 d/ h3 J2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型) ; M3 C# C  a) d$ K$ F# D! r- u+ G' r
(本类型只agree)
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& I# n& T3 A9 ^(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C. ' ^0 C+ T3 i6 q- x
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
6 q" J: `1 l% C. s9 Z/ mWhat is also worth noticing fact is that…… . M8 G5 }$ N1 f" J+ a  }
A is superior in another way, this is… % Q; ~" F2 N6 c5 z' h
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… , D5 `& {. W% W- u# h
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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- g+ `' s$ n& X- z" e; k% A9 V- x(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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$ I" A4 y  |2 r+ nThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
* j; u/ A, r. J1 A5 DWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
' g. [/ I' {9 Y6 L/ QThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
: ?8 B# \5 O# L: gWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
4 k# t) q; `# z# k  B; WC is superior in another way, this is…
9 L3 B: K9 n- r1 b0 ~# rFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C   k# W5 ~/ K  k/ |1 i8 ^1 c
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
( g2 W! x3 ?0 x! T; E+ @(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.) 3 d( y6 S1 G8 q

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1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows. . B; f4 f8 ^3 R. K9 V- {7 v& Y
One of the primary causes is that… ( J; P$ V2 |4 O0 q
XXX also results from…
: ?/ m! F: R' E3 Z… is responsible for xxx, as well. ( w: _" K  o1 M
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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% J5 i+ V( ~0 _2 V/ |; t" k2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something. . Z7 l7 d8 a' @1 {* U# S
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that… / Q/ I* N0 m, ^1 M
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
" ^& k2 [4 g& Z  k/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that… 2 C! M0 r7 }9 R7 [) {$ O

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2 n  w! j6 _( m8 ?" ~a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?% c2 m" }; Y" Q( K

* D$ l5 t& W' y' b. G再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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