TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架

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9 l; t7 S# T" }3 m(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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7 z- g6 @) S8 r& L" {1 n(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
0 q. f8 O8 l! ]5 XThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
. N9 _2 q! k  t- ?From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...


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) s5 ^& L+ X: W( ~$ A2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)



( _. u* ^. r6 M2 DTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
8 K! V4 S) r8 d2 ^2 fmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.




(二)单一观点式
+ L: `2 V( h/ r5 d' v1 L1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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! C6 `9 B/ N, z  o7 m+ Y4 A首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
& m* \) B# L( R1 W! H2 P8 m+ |After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
! M) d- l" X' a4 }Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
- j, f( j/ `, g6 e! hFinally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…

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* a" y/ L6 y  @% [' M( A- P+ f２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
; O5 v! C0 ?( H- }, N! OThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
0 D; n, D$ v9 \- a/ R% U" YWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
6 p* k" N% N/ E( G, o: F( j3 VA is superior in another way, this is…
% |2 A$ g1 T  D& f, K! J7 I& \It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
4 f2 M$ n) G1 I2 r8 w/ `: vFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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" r% I. `1 N' m3 SThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
" H3 [5 ]7 @/ V/ y; fWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
; {8 T9 o& }  Q) F. q1 q3 o9 E' r7 uC is superior in another way, this is…
- A, a' Y. X- r- r$ KFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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1 O' _: I1 R+ y) ^- n& l& H陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
- ], X, l5 t, M' i# ^$ KXXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX

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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.


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背景描述
, A& h$ ]( X0 n) \5 F# [There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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. A+ p7 R  n+ H! ia more subtle point which we must consider is that…

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In addition/ furthermore
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  _1 _/ T+ j* {& K! H5 O% ^In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]