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I just wrote a poem
- Y" b$ q. s$ O: HBesides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
6 E5 H! `5 k2 z4 v i1 B. h3 N7 cHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem) \9 m2 p8 R, t& i+ H M. V* a
Thanks a lot!!!* R$ p# O" c: V4 @; U2 g
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+ u# n0 t9 a3 G Q) X5 qFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
+ H& Y; d3 J& ^' w Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
4 f) z4 S/ m" Y% }+ {7 h1 b Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 2 ^1 A% e6 L$ s
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
, r( Z! _$ T" B" k4 z3 a0 V Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind % q% X3 d: R7 k+ V, g/ r
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness - y; u/ R' G5 j2 e" O& p
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday ) [: y* a1 d }( {+ @3 e, T
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
. e" t$ k6 ^# W! V; t0 K somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness* s% P7 X" x: a, ?$ A: y: E
somehow I lost myself inside again - c( L0 u7 _# h3 f
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
2 {" V! Q: E) P3 { somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
; ]! d- Y6 F1 X. W) z7 u! ?+ IFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................# H" v& L1 ? d8 e6 }
Basically, I almost finish this poem& n' w& ?# l1 a, ^* A! g( k# s; W
I am 一个人de精彩
2 \. W( F* V" b; d0 F I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything. o/ s/ ~! t0 {/ w* X+ C* A4 o
But........
% e7 g9 ]8 B; L2 QIronically? Isn't it? |
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