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I just wrote a poem: b$ [$ o& p" Q2 T" \2 a: U) C
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
3 B7 y( x! V, HHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
" @- O% |9 d) [. n5 Z" _3 X% yThanks a lot!!!4 G' I0 h; J6 ?: P
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 7 e+ q7 v4 i' O5 b7 x) H2 F
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 2 O7 Z4 C3 p2 l( d% n6 i
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
- E, Q% f$ p$ C/ _+ l" K6 q Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
/ i- X0 Y, o* _3 R* H2 u Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 7 N6 {6 d. @* [, M5 k) Y% G6 h
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness * _4 Q. z1 c$ e/ H' I
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 9 R: ~1 B# N* i n; o
somehow I realized you were still in my heart 9 l4 m3 F4 D! k0 h+ {8 i
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness8 @6 Q) F; R1 f" W! o% K
somehow I lost myself inside again % Q: N! [) h8 y U2 P9 \/ y3 P
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
7 U" e" c( |, N; X$ D somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion# P( k3 ?, q1 l3 O+ z: F1 M
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................4 l. C+ ]! B# M5 ~
Basically, I almost finish this poem
! R' b1 Y3 A2 ?% H) i) X I am 一个人de精彩" H) C! ~( B. O) o3 L, k
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything. g. ~* g/ V& a- t9 x& L% C
But........
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42